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Ashleigh Brown

  • General Fiction Novels Re: A Forbidden Love: Chapter Three

    I think your story is still good, and I love the way you make Chris act like he doesn't like her, it makes the story all the better... Pm me ...

    Apr 5, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Black Hearts, Blue Tears

    Wow!! That was really good you has me hooked... Keep it up!

    Mar 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chapter 5: Eddie's side of the story

    Still amazing, I have to say this is one of my favorites... I just can't get enough of it!

    Mar 8, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: A Forbidden Love: Chapter One

    Hi I really like your story, it kept me interested and going the whole time....can't wait to read some me if you do.

    Mar 8, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: How to Forget ch 1

    Hi I really liked it and noticed you added some more and its still good. Anyway I like the story line and I enjoy reading it. Also there's not a ...

    Mar 3, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Still debating over title

    Just going through a break up :( and it gave me some ideas :) ..... so is it good. Envy is what I feel when I see them together holding ...

    Mar 1, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Bedside Reminder

    I liked it very questioning, but like wordartisan it was a little confusing. Other than that I would like to read more of it.

    Feb 25, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Edited Arriere Pensee Chapter 1

    [b] Hope this is better thanks to everyone who reviewed it. IT was that cold unforgettable winter’s day. At the time I was seventeen, just starting my junior year. I ...

    Feb 24, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Impossibly Inlove..

    That was really good when I first looked at it I thought this is a long one, but I read it and I couldn't stop. The way you describe everything ...

    Feb 22, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Changes: Chapter 3

    “Don’t sweet it ill be back later cya,” don't sweet it I think you meant don't sweat it. Also there is another error when you put of twice and it ...

    Feb 22, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Changes: Chapter 2

    Hi I am really bad at reviews I just like the reading part, and I felt it was great. I was hooked to it when I read the first sentence ...

    Feb 22, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Changes: Chapter 1

    hey i really liked this it was good, and something we all can relate back to. How many of us have been in this position? Way too many of us. ...

    Feb 22, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Arriere Pensee Chapter 3

    hope you like it if not TEAR IT APART IF YOU HAVE TO :D The ride there was taking forever, and the loud sing of the officers didn’t really help. ...

    Feb 22, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Positive Chapter Two (edited)

    Hi you review mine all the time now its time for me to review you. Except I have this weakness for really good stories, and I end up not looking ...

    Feb 19, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Arriere Pensee Chapter 2

    I know description say end of the world, and your wondering why it hasn't happen yet...... Well it is but later on so bare with me :lol: feel free to ...

    Feb 18, 2009


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